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Merlin33069

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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 12:45 am Post subject: My first High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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This story may be short due to a restriction on time and for that I am sorry. This is also my first story I personally have written so I hope it is good and thank you to anybody who reads this.
NOTE;
The author takes no blame (as if) for this story, this story is 100% fiction and thus should only be treated as so and no harm has or will ever come of this story yada yada yada
Chapter 1: The Ride there, Home and following night.
Shelly was in the car already and as always, in a rush. She had waited till the last minute to get ready for school. I headed out the door to our car waiting in the driveway, a fairly new (but still piece of junk) sports-car that we had recently gotten off my uncle Bob. Anyway I was rushing along behind my sweetheart and jumped in the drivers seat so we could get going.
I am a teacher at my daughters school and I teach a few grade levels in front of where she is and I do not wish to give any ages for reasons related to rules. but I had always enjoyed the little sneak peaks I would get from time to time up the skirts of the girls as they had still not quite gotten the decency thing down, and today was no different I had a boner within the first five minutes. Luckily the dress policy out here in the middle of the boon-docks wasn't as strict as other places so my shirt covered up most of it.
The school day was nothing special but as I waited for my little girl to return to the car after school I couldn't help but remember those cute panties I had seen earlier. shelly arrived and we left to go home.
"Shelly, Hun, could you get my briefcase from the backseat?"
"sure dad." she said. as she leaned back I got a fine view of her barely clad pussy under her skirt and I was half tempted to reach over and clasp her for the moment. but it passed and I would just have to relieve myself later.
we got home and I proceeded to cook dinner, Shelly's favorite, shrimp and French fries (I know but it was all I could think of: writers comment)
and by the time they were done shelly was already done with her little afternoon routine. As we sat down for dinner I was granted another peak at her private parts, oh glorious days!
the late TV shows came around and as every night we sat and stared at the tube while we waited for our lives to flow away as it seemed, I had never been a big TV person and was glad when the nightly shows were over, I proclaimed that I was going upstairs to take my bath and she could do as she wished.
at last I thought I can finally get a little private relief.
I went to my room and gathered my clothes and my towel and headed for the bathroom. I always took baths as it gave me time to relax (and pleasure) myself. Occasionally I would fall asleep a for a little while never really knowing for how long.
It was one of those days and I fell asleep for a little while only to be awakened by a soft knock on the door. Oh no. I thaught that must be shelly thinking im done and in bed
I opened my mouth to say I was still in here but it was too late she already had the door open and was coming inside, she was one of those people who entered a room backwards so they could close the door and she didn't even know i was there, I also noticed all she was wearing was here towel and when she locked the door behind her she dropped her towel and turned around.
"HUH??" she said when she saw me "What are you doing in here dad? I-I" she stammered "I'll go on back to my room"
I hurried through the possible outcomes in my head and decided to try "It's al right shelly why don't we take a bath together?"
"What? but daddy?" This was the first time I had seen her naked since her mother had left and I was really getting turned on, I somehow managed to control my Penis and not get a erection, just below the rim of what my daughter could see.
"It's all right I can wash you and you can wash me it will be fun." I didn't think she had ever seen a cock so i was going to try and hide it, but how? "How's about a nice bubble bath?" I said reaching for the cheap shampoo that should hide it.
I put in the shampoo and made bubbles enough so you couldn't see through and asked her to sit in the far end of the tub. "Daddy, ive been thinking."
"Yes Hun" i asked back
"Well all the girls talking at school I had kinda been wondering what it was like."
I hoped this was going where i thaught, "What what was like?"
"Sex, daddy, what's it like?"
"Well uh its... nice and..." i knew what i wanted to say but i didn't know how to word it so that she would understand
"Well, maybe you could show me?"
Okay I put a lot of time in it and its longer than i expected but i don't want to get into the details if what’s above isn't worth reading ANY criticism would be nice especially since this is my first post and If i get replies before tonight or tomorrow i will try to do a little more.
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docsavage7 Site Admin

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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:05 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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For a first story, it's not bad Merlin33069.
Now for some, helpfully, good advice...
Please understand that I'm NOT a writer, but a collector of stories and Novels.
I totally adore reading and know what I like. I've over 3,000 stories/novels in my little collection.
I would have left the reader hanging after this paragraph, with a promise of more coming if any interest..
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| I opened my mouth to say I was still in here but it was too late she already had the door open and was coming inside, she was one of those people who entered a room backwards so they could close the door and she didn't even know i was there, I also noticed all she was wearing was here towel and when she locked the door behind her she dropped her towel and turned around. |
I felt that the story came across as rushed after this paragraph, which in my opinion, was a pity. Especially after such an awesome buildup.
You could have left the reader hanging by using instead of a fullstop, I would have used ".......", thus, "she dropped her towel and turned around...."
I don't know how long this took you to produce, BUT it's a great start. And I'm looking forward to you either continuing this story or your next one.
Thx 4 sharing this with us Merlin33069...
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:15 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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im planning on waiting for maybe a few more replies and continuing, i might go back and start again where you suggested and slow it down a bit i may give it some thought. and by the way I made it up as i went so forward the end i myself started to get a little turned on and just so everyone knows i think i will leave the ages left out and to the imagination *cough cough... _________________ Those who will...
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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:47 pm Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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| Merlin33069 wrote: |
| im planning on waiting for maybe a few more replies and continuing, i might go back and start again where you suggested and slow it down a bit i may give it some thought. and by the way I made it up as i went so forward the end i myself started to get a little turned on and just so everyone knows i think i will leave the ages left out and to the imagination *cough cough... |
Please continue writing Merlin33069...
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:48 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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okay i wil continue but i cannot post until tommorow after work goodnight _________________ Those who will...
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 3:00 am Post subject: Okay here goes High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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So to continue where I should have left off...
Shelly turned around and saw me sitting in the tub just staring at her blossoming young womanhood and was shocked to even see me in the room. I was a big fan of bubble baths even at my old age and always had to have a lot of bubbles, and right now I was glad as I got an erection and was hoping Shelly couldn't see the bubbles move.
she came out of her shocked state and started to turn to leave. I played with the thaught for a moment and said "shelly? why don't we take a bath together? it might be fun."
"maybe" she agreed "but the tub is a little small for both of us." she pointed out.
"you put your back against that wall and ill sit the other way and we can see if we will fit."
"okay, we can try"
so she got in the tub and faced me with our legs mingling under the soap in the middle. we started to wash and joke about with each other as my erection just got stronger and stronger eventually I had to do something about it. "shelly? why don't we wash each other? that might be fun"
she agreed once more and got the soap "you first" she said
"all right" and she started to wash me starting with my back, chest and she started to work her way down when i said "okay your turn"
"im not done yet" she complained
"I know, but i don't want you to have all the fun" I took the soap and started washing her back and chest, as i started working my way down, my erection started throbbing insane like, i continued on to her legs to come back to her private parts later, i worked my way down to her feet and lightly tickled them while i was washing, she giggled and I told her to stand up.
"why?"
"so i can clean your private parts really good" I replied. she hesitated and started to stand up, the water running off her body as I took in her lovely picturesque figure once again. I reached my hand out with the rag and cleaned, slowly the outer edge of her lips, i used my free hand to part them as i went a little deeper, she shuddered as i spent an extra long time on the spot where they met at the top.
"It tickles" she said
I continued to clean her well after I knew i was done I would press a little harder each time i went over her beautiful hole and contemplated loosing the rag all together, i knew she liked it just by the way she rocked her hips slowly as i went paying more and more attention to here button and wondering if she could go off.
"Okay daddy your turn, but i think you need to get on your knees, your too tall to stand."
"I guess your right pumpkin." I sighed and stood up, my erection now in full view of my now hot daughter.
"daddy? why is it so big?"
I knew she knew what a penis was but maybe she didn't know very much of sex. "it gets that way sometimes Hun, its only when there is a girl close-by me though"
"oh okay" she said though i could tell she still didn't really understand. she washed my legs and my penis and I almost went off a few times and had to stop her "does it feel like It did when you cleaned me?" she asked "it felt really good when you cleaned me down there"
"Yes Hun it feels really good" she finished sooner than I had hoped and we both dried each other and headed to our rooms, I waited until I thaught she was asleep and headed for her room, I know she only slept in her underwear and I figured seeing her might help me relive my load.
As I approached her door I heard a faint sound from inside the room and it took me a second to realize what it was (oh yeah that's really classic, can any of you guys guess what it was? maybe crying or snoring? no? really?; authors note!! ) she was moaning and I thaught I knew why, I slowly opened the door which, thank all the gods, I kept oiled, She was laying on the bed, naked, pleasuring her self to a climax, I nearly let my load right then, but, due to sheer shock, I couldn't. I slowly came out of my shock as she started moving her hand faster and faster, her moans becoming louder, i figured this was probably one of her first times, if not her first, she was shaking around quite violently and I once again almost lost my load, after she came back down she was exhausted and slowly went to sleep, all the while I was watching from my place in the doorway. (I cant think straight I'm about too lose mine now, not, I'm just keeping you guys in suspense for a later part...; authors note!!!!! )
okay my second part is done and i think i will read it again and relieve myself, MAN, but I cant create the story if I'm not turned on it just doesn't seem as good, and i cant be turned on if I cant even get a boner because I relieved my self BTW any advice once again would be helpful.... _________________ Those who will...
oh my god they killed Kenny!!
those BASTARDS |
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shitforbrains

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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 5:46 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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| I can't give you too much advice, but I can say that I like where this is going and the pace of it. One part of me liked it VERY much. |
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Sun Feb 24, 2008 7:46 pm Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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2nd part wqs also very good. i myself cant give any advise as i have never tried my hand at writing. will be waiting on next installment  _________________ Don't knock masturbation, it's sex with someone you like! |
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 8:22 pm Post subject: Question High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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I have a small question that has nothing to do with the above story
did you all by chance give any notice to the comments put in by myself and did you like the added touch or should I get rid of them? Honestly?
and im starting part three back soon _________________ Those who will...
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Merlin33069

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Posted: Mon Feb 25, 2008 9:19 pm Post subject: Part Three (3) High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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Okay, this story is progressing too fast, I like my story as the top in the board and I hope to keep it that way untill it is done, alas, if I cant continue or post for some reason or another I wont have a choice in the matter.
I thank everyone for the posts and for the advice, doc. I think I like the second piece more than the first only because I am starting to loosen up and write what I want instead of what I believe the readers will like, though that has some ruling as to what I put in, on to part three, sorry for my rambling.
Part 3
She slowly drifted into sleep, I hoped, and I inched inward, toward her still naked body, I was beside the bed before I realized what I was doing, I rolled her to the side of the bed and after de-clothing (is that a word?) myself I got in beside her and curled up, I wanted to snuggle but was asleep before I knew.
I awoke startled by the absence of the little body I had gone to sleep with, "Uh oh", I thaught, "what did I do?" I got up and went in search for
my daughter and see what she thaught about last night.
she was watching tv in the living room. "Hey shelly, sleep good?"
"Yes daddy, why were you in my bed?"
"I thaught you might need some company last night, you know... I was lonely... and uh..."
"It's okay daddy, I know youve been lonely ever since mom... you know."
"your right hun, maybe I should just let her go, it's been a long time."
"Can we take a bath again tonight?" (what? where the hell did that come from????? ;authors note)
"what? yeah sure I guess."
"yay!!" she said with obvious glee"
'what did I just do'
The day went by like most other weekend days do, we watched tv and played games most of the time, I knew she had no weekend homework, one of the perks of being a teacher, and the nightly soap opera's of our house came around and we sat for the two hours eating popcorn and chips as usual. when it was time for our bath I headed upstairs to get un-dressed. (thats the word I was thinking about earlier oh well;author note)
I was a bit aprehensive once again, to see my daughter naked, but I went in the bathroom with another boner. she lit up like a lightbulb as I walked in and got in the tub, we played around for a few minuites before we really got to the fun stuff.
She wanted to do me first this time so i agreed and got on my knees to let her clean me, after a few agonizingly slow and teasing minuites she quite harrasing and torturing my penis and stood up, I washed her hair, back and chest and slowly worked my way down, I found her button and decided to play my best to get her off, I focused only on that spot for a few moments and she bagan to rock.
I knew I could do it in no time, and decided I was going to give her a few, I kept focused on that spot as her breathing began to quicken and she started to moan quietly, she buckled slightly and I knew it was coming, I decided to take my chances and spread her lips with one hand, I surrounded her little button with my mouth and swirled around her button with my toungue, her hands instantly went to the back of my head and forced my face onto her spot as her climax erupted, I could barely hold my face there to keep my toungue going.
"oh daddy!" she exclaimed as she slowly came down. "that was wonderful"
she was exhausted and wanted to lay down her back on the rim of the tub and her legs slightly spread, she drifted there clearly not taking in her surroundings, I reached down and carresed her all around, mainly around her private, though her budding breasts and ass were in the mix, she clearly liked the attention, she smiled slightly.
as I was carresing her private parts I had a crazy idea, I slipeed a finger slightly inside her hole and she gasped in surprise. "Daddy, its inside me..." I slid it a little more into my little girls pussy, it had clearly never been opened even the slightest bit and resisted my effort, I wiggled my finger around and took advantage of the space I had to bring my daughter to another climax.
She almost passed out after this horrifically intense orgasm and I decided we were done with our bath for the day, I wound up having to dry and dress us both as she was too tired to complete the task, I figured I would be in her room later so decided to bypass my room altogeather and go lay down with her, we were both asleep after little talk and nothing on what had just happened in the bathtub.
YAY Part three is now done and advice or something to their nature would be apreciated, though i dont think i did too bad. Thanks too you all for reading and this story is far from done!!!!
Stay Tuned for our next installment;
Part 4 _________________ Those who will...
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