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PookaHarvey
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Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 7:10 am Post subject: My cousin and I... High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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| We don't mean to sound a bit ungrateful, but my cousin and I would really like to hear some more feedback on our story. We appreciate those who took the time to read it, but, we're kinda interested in what some of the other members have to say. We're hard at work on chapter 4, but we personally feel some more feedback might give us some extra incentive. |
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PookaHarvey
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PookaHarvey
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Posted: Mon Aug 11, 2008 1:09 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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| Thanks, Doc! We really appreciate your kind words. Feel free to read chapter 4 when you can. Chris and I are hard at work on chapter 5 at the moment. |
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samurai2008

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Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 1:48 am Post subject: High quality incest porn sites. Click here. |
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well i was not going to say anything, but then you made this topic so srew the Itrees i will write what i think.
| PookaHarvey wrote: |
Chapter 1
To begin, my cousin’s name is Christine, but I always call her “Chris” for short. I’m the only one who can get away with doing so. If anyone else did, she would get very upset with them. |
its the start... there is somthing wrong with the start to your story.
wait its not wrong, its more like, out of place.
to be honest i did not even read past that sentance.
i did not need to.
PM me if you want to know whats wrong with this line Mr Harvey and i will tell you.
(to the rest ignore this message... you do it with all my other posts lol)
FOX _________________ never wound what
you can't kill. |
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