INCEST- BOARD

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

Okay Folks, Here's the start of my very first story offering. This is a fantasty of mine that I've had rolling around in my head for quite a while. It's taken me a week just to get this much done, so Don't be surprized if it takes another week for the next part. ANY feedback is welcome.

It's Her Birthday

It's Tonya's thirteenth birthday and, with her mom has been away on business for over a week, her dad must help her celebrate.

We start our journey at home, with Father and daughter standing in the kitchen, having just finished cleaning up after lunch. They are still dressed in their nightclothes; he in his pajamas and she in a very short nightgown.

Dad asks, "Well sweetie, what do you want to do for your birthday?"

Without hesitation, Tonya bursts out, "I know exactly what I want to do (Get your credit card ready, daddy). I want to go shopping for a new dress then, I want to have dinner at the Palomar, followed by a movie and maybe some dancing."

"(Uh oh, this is going to cost me). Really? I thought you'd want Yucky Cheese and a stomach churner ride at the park."

"No way! I'm thirteen now. I don't want to do kids stuff! I want a dinner date with my dad."

Saying, "Hmmm", and thinking to himself, (Maybe this won't be so bad after all. At least it's not the racket at Chucky Cheese and the amusement park.), "if that's what you want, then that's what you'll get."

"For real?", Leaping at her dad, she wraps her arms around his neck, her legs around his waist and gives him a great big kiss on the lips. "Thanks dad! You're the best!"

Holding her up with each hand holding a small, firm butt-cheek encased only in a thin pair of cotton panties and feeling her tightly rounded ass in his hands, dad suddenly realizes that Tonya is growing up. He also notices that he really likes what he feels and then, just as quickly, has a flash of guilt and drops Tonya on her feet. "Well young lady, you better go get ready to shop while I make our reservations. (Holy shit! I just held her butt and got excited! She my daughter! Hell, she's thirteen and my daughter!! Jesus!)"

"Okay father", she says while giggling, "Why don't you put on your best suit so we can go to dinner as soon as we finish shopping?"

Thinking to himself (Oh, I'm getting tired already), "Are you going to spend that much time shopping for a dress?"

"Of course daddykins. You don't think I'm going to let you off the hook that easy, do you? Besides, I want to make sure I get exactly the right dress. (Ooo… it's going to be sooo pretty) But first, we have to stop and get icecream."

A while later, her dad calls out from the bottom of the stairs, "Tonya? Are you ready yet?"

Like a vision from a dream, Tonya, now wearing a pretty pink sundress, appears at the top of the stairs. The dress reaches a few inches above her knees and drapes over her chest. accentuating her freshly budding breasts. Striking a pose, she asks, "What do you think? Do you like it?"

Her dad stands in awe for a moment, just looking at his beautiful girl. "It's beautiful. Is that new? When did you get it?"

Starting down the stairs, with a sway her father never noticed before, until now, "Mom got it for me before she left town. You really like it?"

Swallowing hard, so he can speak, "Oh yes, I do. I like it very much. It makes you look so… uh… grown up."

Reaching the last step, she stands on her toes and plants a quick peck on her dad's cheek, "Thanks dad, that's the nicest thing you could have said. I feel grown up just wearing this."

Exiting the house, they head for the car and as her dad is getting in, he notices Tonya just standing by her door. "What's wrong honey?"

"Aren't you going to open the door for you date?"

"Oh, so that's how it's going to be, eh? Okay. One moment while this ape of a date walks over and on his knuckles and opens the door for his helpless little monkey girl." Walking like a gorilla, her rounds the car, opens the door and ushers 'money girl' into her seat.

As Tonya gets in, her dad gets a glimpse of thigh and a small, involuntary moan escapes his lips. "What did you say, ape man?", followed by a fit of giggles. "Nothing monkey girl." More giggles, now from both.

Ape man, I mean Tonya's father, escapes back around the car, slides in and buckles up. He automatically turns and checks that Tonya has buckled up as well, notices the way her shoulder belt crosses in between her breasts and for the first time ever, realizes, (She's got breasts! When did that happen?).

Noticing that her dad is just staring at her, "Dad, are you okay?"

Caught up in his thoughts, he doesn't know he was staring, "Hm? Uh… yeah. I'm fine."

"Well, what were you staring at?" (Was he looking ay my boobies? No way!)

Regrouping, "I'm uh… I was just thinking how pretty you look in that dress." (Jeez! What's gotten into me today?)

Just to tease him, she giggles again, blushes a little and says, "You sure you weren't looking at my boobies?"

Nearly choking on his own tongue, he stammers, "Uh no…, well maybe, uh… only a little. I didn't know you had ah… boobies, I mean breasts." Caught off guard, he spits out the truth.

(O! M! G! He WAS! He was looking at my boobies!) Still blushing, but not really offended, "DAD! How could you?"

Not realizing that his thirteen year old daughter wasn't really mad at him for ogling her half-lemon sized titties, he tries to explain himself. "I'm sorry honey, I… I didn't mean to stare. I mean, well, you're growing up and… and when I saw that you, you know, had um, you know, breasts, well, I was kinda shocked and got to thinking that you really are growing up. Okay?"

"But you really noticed them, huh? I mean, they're not too small? I didn't think guys would notice them until they got bigger." (Oh God! Did I just say that? Am I really talking to my DAD about my BOOBS?)

Startled, her dad struggles to digest what he just heard. "Uh… what? Uh… yeah, uh… I did, uh no, they're not too small. What I mean is they look nice to me." Still trying to cope with his thoughts and grasping for the right thing to say (What the heck am I saying?). "I didn't mean it to sound like that. I meant to say that they look fine just the way they are." (Whew) "Honey, I… I don't think we should be talking about your… uh… growth. It's kinda embarrassing for me. Okay?"

Herself, both embarrassed and pleased at the same time thinks, (Oh wow! They're NOT too small. He said they are 'nice'!). "Um… okay, yeah, well it's just, well… nevermind."

"What? What is it?"

"I just wanted to know if I was pretty."

"Pretty? Once course you're pretty."

"I meant, pretty enough."

"Pretty enough for what?"

(Okay, here goes.) "Pretty enough for guys to notice me."

(Uh oh. How do I answer that one?) "Absolutely. I bet everybody in the mall will be looking at you." (Especially every boy and every man, too.)

Glowing with happiness, she just bubbles as she says, "Really? Dad, you're the best."

They both reach across the center console, at the same time, and give each other hug and a kiss on the cheek.

Breathing a silent sign of relief, her dad relaxes back into his seat. "Thanks, you are too." (Damn! JUST having this talk is making me hot.) "Let's go get icecream!" He says just a little nervously.

"Hurrah!"

Xx8ball1 · Moderator Joined: 20 Apr 2006 Posts: 1776 Location: usa

great story so far will be waiting for next part Very Happy

DocSavage7 · Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:18 am Post subject:

Awesome story SFB... Looking forward to the next installment! Thx 4 the share! Very Happy

Doc

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

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Chapter 2 - The Ice Cream Parlor

On the drive to the ice cream parlor, Tonya’s dad couldn’t keep himself from glancing over at his daughter’s legs. He could see her knees and her slender, partially exposed thighs and thinking to himself (Man! Her legs are really starting to look nice! God! What a perv I am. I can’t believe this. I’ve gotta quit looking at her like that. She’s gonna catch on. She’ll get all grossed out.)

Tonya, on the other hand, is not noticing her dad’s discrete little looks at all. Instead, she’s caught up in her own thoughts. (This is SO cool. Dad noticed that I’m growing up and is treating me like an adult. Mom wouldn’t do that in a million years. I’m still her little baby. Hmff! This is the best birthday yet and it’s just starting!)

Going to great pains to stop paying attention to his daughter’s looks, dad manages to drive to the ice cream parlor, without wreaking the car. Of course, dad, the ‘ape man’, must open the door for his ‘monkey girl’ and when she swings her legs out, dad is treated to a careless, heart-stopping view of the crotch of his thirteen year old daughter’s tight, white cotton panties. That quick flash, of Tonya’s soon to be mature vagina, causes her dad to start fluffing up.

Thinking to himself, (I swear to God. Oh my God, I’m gonna get a hardon and squirt in my damned pants if this keeps going on.)

After getting out of the car, Tonya notices her dad’s pained expression. “What’s the matter?”

“Huh? Nothing!”, a little too quickly.

“Yes there is. What is it?”

“Well”, trying to soften the blow, “When you got out of the car, you uh… showed uh… um… a uh… little too much and I couldn’t help but look and uh…” he trails off in embarrassment.

“OH MY GOD”, she exclaims, as she reaches for the hem of her dress, trying belatedly to regain her modesty. “Oh dad, I’m so embarrassed.”

“It’s okay honey.” (No it’s not! I’m sweatin’ bullets here.) “You are becoming a lady now and you have to be a little more aware of uh… what you let me uh…people see, I mean uh… you have to keep yourself covered. Okay?”

“I’m SO sorry! Oh God! I didn’t mean to do that.” (Whoa, dad looks really pissed off.) “Your not too mad at me, are you?”, as she chokes back a tear.

Seeing that Tonya was on the verge of crying, her dad spreads his arms wide, gives her a big grin and says, “Awww, come here ‘monkey girl’ and give your old ‘ape man’ a hug. I’m not mad at you. No. Never. Not for something like that. I know it was an accident. Just don’t flash your old man like that again or I’ll have to tickle you until you pee.”

Quickly closing the short distance between them, Tonya embraces her dad with a breath-stopping squeeze, mashing her tit buds against his abdomen and her stomach pressing against his crotch.

“Thanks dad. That means a lot.”

His dick, trapped between them and already on the alert, rises to half-mast and starts to push itself into his daughter’s belt-line, while she holds him tight. Feeling his penis starting to really swell, and knowing that his daughter will feel it, Tonya’s dad, using her shoulders as leverage, quickly pushes her away. And not a moment too soon either, because just then, his half-hard erection jumps in his briefs and leaks a little pre-cum. (Shit! That was close. She’da felt THAT for sure!) “It’s okay and you’re welcome, sweety.” Holding out his arm, he says, “Let’s go pig out”! Tonya slips her arm around her dad’s and he escorts his darling ‘date’ across the parking lot.

Once inside, they get their ice cream and sit down, accross from each other, and out of ear-shot of the other customers. Dad, is quite proud of himself for not staring too much. Tonya is sitting as proudly as a neo-woman can sit, while across from her own father. They enjoy a light-hearted conversation about the other patrons, trying to read what they are thinking just by their looks or making up something funny about them. “That old man in the green t-shirt wants to scratch his butt, but can’t.” “The little girl in the blue dress is thinking, ‘They better let me have TWO scoops or I’ll throw a fit.’” “The tall teenage boy, the one with the droopy jeans, is thinking, ‘I am so hot. I bet all the women in here are looking at me and want a date.’” “No, that’s not it. He’s thinking, ‘I hope my jeans don’t fall down or they’ll see that my underwear is dirty.’” All this accompanied by quite a bit of snickering and a couple of choked-down laughs.

After a while, their evaluation tapers off and dad gets lost in his thoughts again. He reviews all he has seen and thought about today; her growing breasts; her thin but shapely legs and thighs; her sweet little butt, and that panty shot! His thoughts wander on to what it would feel like to caress her smooth legs, rub his hardon against her belly or her ass…

Tonya, too, is doing a little day-dreaming. (I wonder what it would look like if that boy’s jeans really DID fall down, and took his underwear with them? That would be so cool. I bet he’d pee himself. I wonder what he looks like.) Looking back at her father, she comes out of her day-dream.

“DA-AD! What in the world is wrong with you today?”

“Huh? What, oh uh um… jus… nothin’! My uh mind’s just elsewhere, honey.”

“You’re lookin’ at me like… I don’t know… like you’re dreaming or somethin’.”

(If she only knew WHAT I was dreaming ABOUT…) “Sorry honey, I can’t help it. Uh… just thinkin’ about how beautiful and grownup looking you are now.”
“Oh dad, you keep saying that. Don’t make me blu-ush.” (Wow. I guess daddy really does think I’m growing up. Gee.)
Finishing their ice-cream, they head back to the car. At the last second, ‘ape man’, remembers to get the door for Tonya but, this time, he makes himself avert his eyes. Tonya notices and says, “It’s okay father, I got in like a lady. I don’t want you having a heart-attack.”
(I would have, too!.). “Thank you dear. Most courteously done.” He bows.
“You’re so funny, dad.” (Laughing and giggling all around).
Coming - Chapter 3 - The Mall

Xx8ball1 · Moderator Joined: 20 Apr 2006 Posts: 1776 Location: usa

well i am no critic but i think this story is very good and very well written. thank you will be waiting for the next installment. Very Happy

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

vampire_lover0 · Joined: 19 Apr 2007 Posts: 646

Very nice. More please

DocSavage7 · Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 1:09 pm Post subject:

Wow! I'm really enjoying your story as it's going along SFB... I believe we have the makings of a great writer in our midst.

You asked me for my opinion, so here goes:

1. I would underline the Title, to highlight it.

2. Chapter 1 has a couple of mistakes in spelling and grammar.

3. Chapter 2 it seemed to be perfect.

4. I loved how you let the reader into what each character was thinking, by including their thoughts in brackets. Which didn't distract from the story at all... least that is my opinion.

Again, thx heaps and I'm certainly looking forward to Chapter 3. Smile

Doc

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

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lildaddy99 · Guest

i would like to see more of this
but u havent uploaded it for 2 months
can we see anymore coming soon
i am enjoying the story so please continue..thankyou

shitforbrains · Joined: 07 Sep 2007 Posts: 1290

Thanks for the interest, lildaddy. I haven't had the time to do more lately. I hope to pick it up again in a week or so, as soon as the tidal wave subsides.

andyex · Joined: 04 May 2007 Posts: 72 Location: herts

Excuse me if this sounds dum, but, tidal wave???????